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Approved Submission [NDC] Department of Medical Services (D.O.M.S.)

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Suggestions: make "The Central Aristocratic Government" a link. Also, you need to be careful about making the titles of your facitonal wiki pages clear about what faction they're for. For example I saw you're working on a article titled "Public Services" but it's not about public services in general, it's about NDC Public Services so it should be titled that. In the same way this article should be re-titled to have NDC at the beginning of its page title. This is the same reason why so many Star Army of Yamatai articles start with "Star Army" ("Star Army Equipment" is clear but "Equipment" would be unclear as a search result, especially as you end up with multiple factions with the same page titles like).

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Went through and did a quick grammar sweep and read it over for clarity. Looks good.
[ ✅ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✅ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ✅ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✅ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✅ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ✅ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✅ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✅ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✅ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

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