Approved Submission [NDC] Ghost Occupation

[Whisper]

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=faction:ndc:occupations:ghost

Submission Faction(s)

1. NDC

Submission Terms

1. I agree

Ghosts are part pilots, part starship operators, with a significant focus on 'possessing' the things that they are piloting/operating via things like the Anima System. They're essentially walking AI cores, whether they be organic or not. Inspirations are characters like Melfina, the Mental Models from Arpeggio of Blue Steel, and others within that line of tropes.

For transparency, we intend to introduce a sort of 'sub-occupation' for the Ghost that is Frame-specific in the near future, but it builds upon and/or modifies the Ghost in various ways so I'm putting this in first.

As an NDC FM, I approve!

Thanks in advance.

(I used the default template for the occupation, as there isn't a true Occupation template)

 

[Andrew]

Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

@Whisper

• The wiki doesn't like the quote ">" sections it counts them as forced line breaks (the same as //) in the wiki quality summary.

• Also, the title should be cleaner, the use of // in the main title/header is dirty formatting.

Outside of that, this is good to go. No issues with this submission.

 

[Whisper]

I was able to fix the line breaks issue by getting rid of a couple of > that I'd been using for spacing. It does mess up the flow a little bit, since it's not as clear that it's all supposed to be one block of text, but it works? It's the only thing I could come up with to get something like a code block that also allowed for formatting. If you have another idea, I'm happy to try that out too.

 

[Whisper]

Also cleaned up the title.

 

[Andrew]

Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.


Approved.