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Needs FM Approval [NDC] Gremlin Cyber-Warfare Suite

Andrew

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FM Approval on this needed. Then will conduct a review.
 

Wes

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Is FM approval gonna happen? We've been waiting a long time.

Tagging @Jack Pine
 

Alex Hart

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It's taken a bit to get to this because of the stuff going on OOC, but I think I'd be ready to FM stamp this if certain sections were removed. I feel like the parts about sensors are better suited to being on their own page, instead of one about an electronic warfare suite.

I'd also kind of like to see a lot of it be reworded to be a bit less awkward or silly, like sending "A decillion bits of explicit pictures", but that's more minor than the bits about sensors.
 

Charaa

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Show me a ship’s sensors page where these would be listed and I will take it out and add them. I don’t want to create a new page just for sensors at this time and Whisper mentioned that the sensors should also be on the page.

Whisper also mentioned that the explicit stuff can be a part of a variation of the Gremlin so not all would. What is said is that the Gremlin can send junk data, though variations can exchange the junk data for something else.

Nyx’s ship is going to be made based on all the starships in video games I have played, and so too would the Gremlin.
 

Alex Hart

FM of NDC
Show me a ship’s sensors page where these would be listed and I will take it out and add them. I don’t want to create a new page just for sensors at this time and Whisper mentioned that the sensors should also be on the page.

From what I can tell, you had written this as a purpose-built electronic warfare suite. Whisper might have been confused and thought that this was a general electronics suite. Sensors don't tend to be built into electronic warfare equipment, I can help you write a dedicated sensors page, but I would like them to be separate so that it's easier to be specific when creating new starships.

Whisper also mentioned that the explicit stuff can be a part of a variation of the Gremlin so not all would. What is said is that the Gremlin can send junk data, though variations can exchange the junk data for something else.

Nyx’s ship is going to be made based on all the starships in video games I have played, and so too would the Gremlin.

Additionally, I would appreciate it if details specific to custom versions of the gremlin were kept on the page of the ship that's using custom stuff (So keeping details specific to the ones that Nyx uses on the page for her starship) and keep this page as the standard version.
 

Charaa

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From what I can tell, you had written this as a purpose-built electronic warfare suite. Whisper might have been confused and thought that this was a general electronics suite. Sensors don't tend to be built into electronic warfare equipment, I can help you write a dedicated sensors page, but I would like them to be separate so that it's easier to be specific when creating new starships.
alright fine i have removed the mentions of explicit pictures and the sensors from the page.
 
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