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Approved Submission NDC Internal Security Division

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It would be a good idea to link to New Dusk Conclave and some other pertinent aspects of their faction since so far the head and your ranking system are the only links.
 
But it is linked, in the section just under the table, there is a link for the NDC.

EDIT: I've added one more section on how they differentiate in the way they operate, and sit in the military chain of command when involved it. Also added available equipment links they can use.
 
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The link to NDC needs to be in the intro paragraph and more noticeable, probably not an acronym but the whole name. I also said "some other pertinent aspects of their faction" so I would like to see those type of links added.
 
I've added the requested link, and added all the links I have that purtain to this page. I don't have many pages, but I got em linked.
 
"If however they do produce evidence, the individuals in question will be put through a tribunal, or dealt with if severe enough to pose a major threat to government security."
How is a tribunal different that being dealt with and what does being dealt with entail?

"However, the primary employee of the ISD are security personnel, tasked with providing to the council, royal family, military hierarchy, and government."
Providing what to the council, etc?

I need those answered in the article, please. I also changed some spelling and grammar.
 
I've made the edits as requested. But to answer Ame, a tribunal is a form of military court, which generally handles legal prosecutions in house. This is a real life thing even.
 
I just didn't understand how that is different than being dealt with, but it makes more sense now. I will checklist tomorrow unless this gets swooped.
 
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[ - (don't worry about this- but it isn't in OP) ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✅ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ✅ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✅ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✅ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ✅ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✅ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✅ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✅ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.


Next time, add the wip submission URL and the future non-wip URL in OP.


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