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Approved Submission [NDC] Standard Communication System

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Currently discussing with Charaa about a few points. Mainly at the moment, that the NDC mainly uses quantum communication which we felt this article did not reflect initially. There are also a few minor grammatical fixes like extra capitalization.
 
Alright, let us know when you're ready.
 
Hey Charaa! Thank you for helping to flesh out the NDC. :D Here's some things I'd like to see changed/updated. There's some general grammar stuff that I'll let the reviewer help you out with. Once these changes are in place, the submission has my stamp. :)

For the 'stat block' portion, you've got YE 43 listed. I'm thinking you mean that the Comm Buoy network fully came online in YE43? If so, can you add a sentence to the opening paragraph to that extent?

No real need to include the data transfer rate, I think. Current fiber tech has hit up to 1.5 Terabits per second so I can't even begin to think about what future tech is gonna do to make a recommendation here. 'Really fast' isn't a great statistic, either, so I'm out of suggestions. :D You've got this in two locations.

Thank you again!
 
I will take a look at this a little later today. Thank @Whisper for your stamp. Stay tuned for my full review.
 
Thank you Whisker, I believe everything is in order, though "Really fast" was something i wasn't able to see unless it was caught. I am however very happy to get this going.
 
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ✅ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✅ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and the article template. Is all the information for struct present?
[ ✅ ] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✅ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✅ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ✅ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ✅ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and credited in the OOC section.
[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✅ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✅ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Approved
 
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