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Rejected Submission [NDC] Survival Preparedness Kits
- Thread starter Charaa
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I'm looking at this, and I'm not entirely sure that this could all fit in a backpack or other thing that someone could carry, and it's also got a lot of things that don't really make much sense to me. I'm not entirely sure why a survival kit would have shield grenades and a shield pylon. I'd encourage you to remove things that you don't absolutely need to survive.
I'm also not sure how it fits 3 weeks worth of water (63 liters, or 3 liters per day for 3 weeks) and 3 weeks worth of rations (63 rations, or 3 rations per day for 3 weeks). Maybe you could cut down on the amount of time, and switch from water to water purification tablets?
I'm also not sure how it fits 3 weeks worth of water (63 liters, or 3 liters per day for 3 weeks) and 3 weeks worth of rations (63 rations, or 3 rations per day for 3 weeks). Maybe you could cut down on the amount of time, and switch from water to water purification tablets?
A liter of water weights 1kg, so that means the water alone is 63 kilograms or 138.89 pounds. That amount of water would take up a space of .5 x .5 x .252 meters or about 20x20x10 inches or the size of a large cake box. I mean, you can make this thing as big and heavy as you want but presumably you want something an individual survivor can comfortably carry.
I've watched a decent amount of videos about survival kits on Youtube and a frequent theme is "how small can I make a kit that's still functional?"
Anyway, the real issue here besides the size and scope of the kits being unclear is that a significant portion of it is directly copied from my Star Army Type 31 Survival Kits article I wrote. I ran both articles through a plagiarism detector website and it found that the article is 23% the same.
You can't just copy-paste my stuff, change a few things and then submit it for the NDC. Make your own stuff.
Submission rejected. You can resubmit when it's original work.
I've watched a decent amount of videos about survival kits on Youtube and a frequent theme is "how small can I make a kit that's still functional?"
Anyway, the real issue here besides the size and scope of the kits being unclear is that a significant portion of it is directly copied from my Star Army Type 31 Survival Kits article I wrote. I ran both articles through a plagiarism detector website and it found that the article is 23% the same.
You can't just copy-paste my stuff, change a few things and then submit it for the NDC. Make your own stuff.
Submission rejected. You can resubmit when it's original work.
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