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  • Current IC Month: 7月 YE 42 (through October 11, 2020)

Approved Submission [NDC] The Capital Obsidian City along with two Departments.

Charaa

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Submission URL
https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=faction:ndc:territory:obsidian_city
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Submission Faction(s)
NDC
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I agree
Alright, so it’s finally time to submit this, but before we begin the process I probably should say something.
As part of the initiative on my part, I started the page and set it up using the Kyoto’s page as a template originally, and I added the appropriate links to the page, in the proper setup, but Alex, wrote the sections while talking to Jack on what should be there, and moved the links to a list format. Jack had written the History section and I added a mention of the Starport to the Commercial district.

I also had created the Department of Communications and Jack did the public service, and Jack had given me permission to submit that page, and Alex said that I should submit the Obsidian city page since I started it.

Also, Nyx’s location is there, with the wip namespace removed [that part removed after a discussion with Jack]
 

Ametheliana

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Submissions Reviewer
Game Master
I added "NDC" to the beginning of each page's title. Sorry if that messes with the Department of Communication's abbreviation! Lemme know if so. My reasoning is that I want someone to know from the search bar alone that this is NDC. :] Great and obviously hard work, Charaa. Ty for that effort : D
 

Ametheliana

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Yeah I was thinking about checking on those but I don't want to bite off more than this submission needs chewed : ] ty for clarifying for me though!
 

Charaa

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Oh also, in order to keep less for the reviewer to do, i left the Hospital, and the tech for that hospital off the list, I promise i will be posting those after this ones done. goodness i can never spell Hospital.
 

Ametheliana

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Because it’s on a three day, don’t worry about waiting. I would be happy to look em over. Please post in a separate thread... Separate is one word I never get right the first time. We’re in the same boat lol
 

Charaa

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heya, it’s been more than 3 days does that mean this is approved or because I posted the Hospital there’s now a wait until that’s approved?
 
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