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Approved Submission Nemesis Bastion (SAoY Base - Siren System)

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Ok! Before i put up the checklist i have just one thing that could use some clarification. @Andrew

The article states that the base is essentially "an effective military city secretly placed in the underground of the rocky terrestrial world." And then lists distances between the various facilities and points.

These distances make nemesis bastion less of a "base" or "City" in comparative size and scale and more of a wide expanse of territory with multiple bases and positions that contend and area of almost 800 square miles (give or take). For scale, the entire city of new york and its sub-provinces take up roughly 300 square miles for comparison. I'm not saying they need to cozy up to one another or even be within a couple of dozen miles but it's a weird flex to have them so considerably far apart and still consider them as the same base unit even with high-speed transit.
 
Since the caverns are using natural volcanic made formations in the rock, they had to deal with the fact they were not necessarily close together. Nature didn't hand them the easy button when it came to these deep underground formations and to carve out artificial ones would have taken more time than having the high-speed transit between them. It also leaves in the fact there are expansion zones which are mentioned as it this something I plan to make significant add ons too.

Plus X-1 really isn't part of the base, it is an exit point and the end of the transit line used for emergency escape.

I've added the following line to provide clarity:

The main base is the Kotoku Cathedral, while the Irim and Adlich facilities are considered satellites.
 
New York is TINY.
Shanghai is almost 2500 square miles and Beijing is almost 7000. Even LA is almost twice the size of New York, London is about twice, and Columbus Ohio is almost as big.
 
That's all it needs then, andrew~


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