Ok heres what i've got:
Most/All NAM items, Being a faction supply manufacturer would go under the wip:faction:nepleslia:equipment namespace instead of the NAM namespace.
Being that the ballistic vest is nothing new, Can we get some description implying better in the intro text and description that it is a replacement for the old, or what have ye? Such as something along the lines on how its a replacement or improvement or modernization upon the old ballistics vest nepleslia lost?
Nerimium , while not impossible to get, Isnt generally sold to the public considering you have to be an industrial powerhouse with government backing like NAM to even produce it, If theres a price on the article it means that it can be publicly bought. Nerimium is also a traditionally very heavy metal. I would recommend for a lack of better options durrandium as the metal insert. On another note if its publicly sold you can create the option to have a civilian version with just the option of durrandium inserts or just traditional steel. And a milspec version that maybe now that nepleslia is incorporating lorath stuff into NAM slightly you can talk with sageshooter on incorporating possibly stone-thread or Duremium as a milspec version. But regardless, Nerimium isnt a good man-portable armor option for a plate carrier or armor bellow T-4. A good example of this is that the Golem; Nepleslias heaviest non-power armor is T-3 and made of durrandium.
you mention accessories that
arent sold but dont list what are sold in a comprehensive list or what they might cost additionally.
The T-2 soft vest feels more like a vest than a plate carrier if its made to fit under clothing, etc. Yet its written much the same as if its a modular plate carrier.
The soft and hard vests should be back-linked to each other.
The wikipedia article for the graphene material should be linked.
The armor(s) should list who can buy them, and who its issued to (NPF, NSN,NSMC,IPG, Indi, Etc.).
@SirSkully please take note of these sugested changes and get back to me. Ill be able to get to the sunday at the latest if you fix them soon.
