Approved Submission [Nepleslia/Lorath] "Bastard" Light cruiser

[Charmaylarg Dufrain]

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=faction:nepleslia:starship_classes:bastard_light_cruiser

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Checkmate Aether Reactor on Star Army Space Roleplay

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Submission Faction(s)

1. Nepleslia

Submission Terms

1. I agree

I don't like ship articles... I really don't like ship articles.

So why do I have no many I feel I need to make? And why do I still plan to make more?


@Legix for nep FM since this isn't a small tech i can just casually stamp on his behalf.

@SageShooter for LSDF stuff cause its using their interiors, materials, and using them for inspiration to make it (plus the LSDF is getting these too). And cause i kept pinging him on the discord to see what other lorath stuff he might advise or want in it AND HE NEVER ANSWERS BACK!

@Charmaylarg Dufrain cause i can ping myself if i want to~

 

[Wes]

Please capitalize all instances of species/nation names like Nepleslian and Lorath.

 

[Charmaylarg Dufrain]

Done. Even added a capital K for kuvexians' considering its the same issue.

 

[Andrew]

I will start taking a look at this while we wait for FM approval.

 

[SageShooter]

I see no issues with the ship, most of the Lorath technologies are just the rooms they use and the weapons in the lockers which are all approved (If a tad overkill on ships. Who is going to unload a box from a devil's fountain in a ship lol...)

An interesting note for the room sizes I've already made aware to Char, if the rooms are sized by Lorath standards, they are going to be tall as the LSDF primarily consists of Fyunnen warriors who as a house are 90% Career military. And with the shorter side of the women in the house being a little over 6' and the higher end being closer to 8', it can call for tall ceilings. But that's just a thing for RP consideration.

 

[Andrew]

Alright, I have been through this a few times, there are still some instances of what Wes was asking you to fix in the sub-articles.

Also, I'm just asking you to go through this again for readability and grammar.

Once you've finished fixing this up, we can get an approval on it.

 

[Charmaylarg Dufrain]

I think I may have gotten them all and touched up the grammar and readability a bit. @Andrew

 

[Andrew]

Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Approved.