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Approved Submission [Nepleslia] Pizza Boyz

The KrimsonWulf

FM of Nepleslia
I like the idea, and as stated previously. I'll discuss this with Charmay and see if there are any additions that need to be made over all.
 

Andrew

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FM of Yamatai
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I like the concept, just need some things to make this fit into the wiki properly. It Will be nice for Kikyo Pie Company to have some competition and this one has some flavor.

On a serious note, with the reviewer hat on:
  • Thing like Funky City, etc should be linked to the wiki
  • Since it is a corp/business or a modification of it. I'd recommend using the Business Template on Star Army Space Roleplay
  • A menu would be nice since this is a food business so people can know what kinds of things they can order. Along with a price list.
 

hyralt

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@Andrew I have done the following:
  • linkified Funky City and Pizza everywhere in the article,
  • reconstructed the page using the Business Template,
  • added a simple menu,
  • created a wip:character:npc wiki page for Joe Mortar, the manager (Andrew suggested this in private communication), and
  • linkified every mention of Joe Mortar.
 

Andrew

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Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ✅ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✅ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ✅ ] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✅ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✅ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ✅ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✅ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and credited in the OOC section
[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✅ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✅ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.


Approved.

I'm looking forward to this showing up in roleplays and it evolving!
 

Andrew

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FM of Yamatai
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