Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...
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This is an excellent article, and props to you for bringing back something incomplete and completing it.
Here's some fixes this article still needs:
1. The DR ratings are a bit wonky, I'm guessing from the conversion process.
1 a. The ship itself should be at tier 9 rather than at tier 7.
1 b. The
Burster assault cannon should be listed at tier 9 rather than 5.
2. I'm in a bit of a pickle here.
This section of DRv3 says that barriers are always on tier with the units fielding them, but there's a fairly large precedent set of allowing this guideline to be looked over. Whether or not those decisions have been made in error aside, I'm not sure what to do about this. I might need to think about it, but suggestions are welcome.
When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!
