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Approved Submission [Neshaten] - Operators Tactical Dress

club24

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Submission URL
https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=faction:neshaten:division_5:operator_tactical_dress
Submission Faction(s)
  1. Neshaten
Submission Terms
  1. I agree
Just a basic lil tactical thingo for my spec ops foxies, also yes I realise I haven't included an appearance section because its mainly explained in the initial few paragraphs along with the camo section.

But if it is the will of the people then I can write a dedicated appearance section as well despite its very basic construction.
 
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Sorry for how long it took me to get to this, @club24. >.<

[ ✔️ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ✔️ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ✔️ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✔️ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ✔️ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ✔️ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ N/A ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ✔️ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✔️ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✔️ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Here are some fixes this article still needs:
  1. Got a couple of really minor questions regarding the About the Operator Tactical Dress section:
    • What are the "dedicated storage methods" for the flashlight, binoculars, and grenades?
    • What's the range of the "short-range communicator" - 75 kilometers?
When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!

Status: Pending
 
what is with these comms ranges, its probably more like, 20km max... cause its just the equivilant of a 2-way radio set with zero antennae or anything

as for storage methods im sure i mentioned a pocket or something in the pack for the binoculars but ill go update it
 
Thanks for making the requested edits in such a timely fashion, @club24! ovob

[ ✔️ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ✔️ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ✔️ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✔️ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ✔️ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ✔️ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ N/A ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ✔️ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✔️ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✔️ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Status: Approved

Thanks again for submitting an article to the wiki! Time for some final steps for the reviewer...

[ ✔️ ] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread
[ ✔️ ] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki
[ ✔️ ] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to
[ ✔️ ] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section
[ ✔️ ] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)
 
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