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Sorry for the mixup it was supposed to be a playable character that has been corrected.I was confused on why tagged at first, but see after reading the page. Organization would be the New Dusk Conclave. Also I'm surprised you made them an NPC instead of a full player character. We do have the university plot if albeit a bit on the slow side, but it covers the slice of life side of things for the faction as well, along with side JP around the students. Also likewise, Ben is in the Brimstone plot which follows our top WRAITH, which Ven is the only other current one of, and his crew doing their sneaky footwork.
Sorry for the mix-up but other than the naming convention how does it look? I am running through the naming convention again. I have been running through the regions to trying to find a matched equivalent. I put some serious time picking a name for the character. Sorry for the delay in reply.If she were born to an Iromakuanhe family, it makes sense her name wouldn't follow Yamataian standards but Iromakuanhe ones: https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=faction:iromakuanhe:naming
Just a tip ^^
Updates have been made let me know what you think. Also, I do thank you for taking the time to help build my character. I did a lot of reading before I ever even started. You can imagine was a lot of information to remember and digest so having a guide was most appreciative.It’s better to take inspiration from, but not rely too heavily, on the real world influences. Do what feels right to you when making a name, on top of adding your own flair.
Move empathy down to the personality section (by a few feet option).
If an alien were to ask you if red hair was “very rare” on earth, would you say yes? I know I wouldn’t. Blue is rare amongst the population of Ivuori- not players. That said it’s not the biggest hangup. Maybe she’s born with it; maybe it’s somatic tuning. Up to you.
The sentence about Xenophobia just doesn’t make sense. The article’s grammar needs adjusting to make sense.
I didn’t catch the name of the freighter. I particularly like the Chinese Empress that fortified the silk road’s outposts so I’ll look into whoever it is you refrenced. Generally taking from real life is a grey area and usually not okay but I’d have to see it. The rest about not being in the Iruotl Cluster is tops- can’t wait to see changes there.