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Orbital Drop Self-Deploying Base (Planet Cracker)

Andrew

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FM of Yamatai
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Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ✅ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ❌ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ❌ ] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ❌ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ❌ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ❌ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✅ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ❌ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ❌ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Here are some fixes this article still needs:

As noted, I moved the submission to an appropriate namespace.
  1. Please consider looking at some examples of already approved articles - Things like compartments, systems, etc need to be explained and described (or in some cases linked).
  2. This needs wikification and linkages to the rest of the SARPiverse and the NDC.
  3. Weapons Systems need to be fleshed out and be given the appropriate Damage Rating (Version 3).
  4. I would suggest reaching out to other experienced NDC designers and other SARPers (Setting Discussion or Worldbuilding) to discuss this article. They can assist you with bringing it up to standard.
  5. The performance information (Speed, etc), Crew loadout, vehicle compliment. Something like this would likely use the Starship Template on Star Army Space Roleplay.
  6. Some grammar needs to be corrected. Please consult the Style Guide.
This submission is pending action from the submitter. Feel free to reach out if you need some assistance.
 

Jomber

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Yup. I was poking around on the Discord for some help. Moving everything to the new template was trickier than I thought. It's all on a google drive doc right now. It's almost done.
 

Andrew

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FM of Yamatai
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No problems, thank you for replying :)
 

Andrew

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FM of Yamatai
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Since a week plus has passed and there has not been any movement other than an update that didn't happen, I am going to move this to rejected/abandoned.

This article can be resubmitted when it has been completed.

In addition, I recommend that you look into some more mentoring and guidance from a more experienced creator and seek assistance with the development of this idea through setting discussion or other means to bring it up to site standards.
 
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