Okay, so it's known why I edited your page; I went through and capitalized a few words. In the future, if you have a header or a field (such as Climb/Descent) you need to make sure those are capitalized. And if you have sentences or words that run along after them, you need to make sure those are capitalized. They're small things but it makes the page look uniform and clean when EVERYTHING is in the same format like that. But I digress; I just wanted to let this be known so no one lost their mind and you knew to FIX THIS IN THE FUTURE.
Also in the future, if you decide to make modification kits for this or upgrades and bodykit swapouts (tinted glass, sliding doors versus standard doors, removal of windows, offroad tires, spoilers...) then you'll need to make a section for it; you can also make one now, but I won't hold you up for it. This is a common practice in vehicles and gear that's standard use these days, particularly in civilian area equipment and has a set-out header in most submissions because of that. Generally, people use tables unless these have sweeping changes or need entire paragraphs. If the list grows long enough, articles also make divided sub-pages (see things like the Upgrade Package for the Hostile for an example)
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