I had a busy few days but I'm working on my character's pre-RP History now. Is this acceptable so far?
Name: Corgan Garret
Age: 20
Race: Nepleslian/ID-SOL Hybrid
Gender: Male
Physical Description: Corgan was a tall, well-muscled young man with short green hair and olive-colored skin. His square-jawed, chiseled European features were adorned with a well-manicured goatee. He had brown cybernetic eyes equipped with night vision and telescopic vision. His right arm was replaced with a shiny, metallic black cybernetic limb from the elbow down. His strength in his right arm was slightly enhanced. It also had a small hidden compartment capable of holding a short blade and a kit for picking locks.
History and Personality: Born on a backwater colony to a Nepleslian mother, Claire Chambers, and an ID-SOL father he never knew, John Garret. His mother was originally a miner, but when her town's economy collapsed, she was forced to move to the big city . Unfortunately, being a very beautiful woman did not help her when she was ambushed by a roving band of slavers. They decided she would make them a good deal of money as a prostitute.