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- Submission RP Example
- https://stararmy.com/roleplay-forum/threads/jintare-koun-first-contact.68946/
- Submission Faction(s)
- Non-Playable Factions
- Submission Terms
- I agree
Any questions or comments can be adressed here.
I have made it in line with the rules.Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...
[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and the article template. Is all the information for struct present?
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and credited in the OOC section.
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Here are some fixes this article still needs:
1. Text needed following all page headers - See Style Guide on Star Army Space Roleplay
2. Remove all bold and use headers for sections instead of bolding stuff - This is important for page navigation
When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!
I'd also ask you to consider that the systems are too far away to have any mechanical effect. we're talking months of travel time at full warp.Fair enough, Alex, though I still personally feel that the system count should still at the very most be around twenty or so - as that way it’s merely a little less then triple the size of most other factions, as opposed to quintuple.
Edit: Regardless, however, consider my complaint officially withdrawn given what Alex posted above. These are merely my personal suggestions, nothing more.