Approved Submission Rufusland System Update

[demibear]

Submission RP Example

https://stararmy.com/roleplay-forum/threads/increased-investment-announced-for-the-red-hitherlands.68770

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=system:rufusland

Submission Faction(s)

1. Yamatai (except Elysia)

Submission Terms

1. I agree

Sub-article wip url: Rufusland System Details on Star Army Space Roleplay
Sub-article url: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=system:rufusland:system_details

Continuing my update of the "Red Lands".

 

[Andrew]

I don't really see any issues with this. I do wonder though if maybe astronomical data couldn't be displayed more compactly instead of another page - see Akina System on Star Army Space Roleplay

This however doesn't affect the review

Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

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Approved.

 

[Andrew]

Moved to: Rufusland System Update on Star Army Space Roleplay