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Approved Submission S6-6mm

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I think this links to your steel ball ammunition, though. Can you double check OP link?
 
Can you link to DR appropriately?

It is chemical, what chemicals make it up?

Can you explain the ammunition more in the opening?
 
Gunpowder, I am not educated on specific chemical bases for ballistic based ammunition types. So I put in "()" gunpowder.

I linked the DRv3 page to T3 as there is no example I could find for how to link in a ammo article. And the template lacks the link already.

Also I added a little bit in the opening on what style of damage the round does. That's all I can think of for that though.
@Ametheliana
 
Take the (gunpowder) out and add a sentence on gunpowder in the bullets usage in the top paragraph.
 
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Approved
 
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Would @Ametheliana (or anyone else, for that matter) mind moving the article to the appropriate namespace, please? I would, but I’m on my phone at the moment. >.<
 
I need a price for these on the page, please.
 
Price added (I found it on the weapon's article).
 
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