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Approved Submission S6-CP "Shade" 10mm compact pistol

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Every header besides the first two do not have prose between them and the subsequent bullet points, chart, or art. Could you please add that?
 
Just as a double-check -- I know you say the art is from OpenClipArt.org, but that's a Taurus PT Millennium, an older generation of Taurus pistol. Are we still OK to take images or photos of real-world pistols and modify them enough that we can use them on the site?

We've done it before without problems. I just hadn't seen one in awhile.
 
Right, I noticed that when I looked at the credit down below.

However, it's still an image of a real gun, even if it was found on a clipart site and modified there-in. I'm just bringing up that fact and making sure it's cool.
 
Okay this is a simple pistol article so nothing really big, but I do have some small questions. The primary basic ammo for this weapon seems to be marked as unapproved on it's article. Is that because someone forgot to mark and move it or should I approve that as well? Also the muzzle flash, the way it's worded, I'm not sure if you're saying it has the standard muzzle flash, or that it is reducing the 'flash' of the muzzle flash. If it's the later, there needs to be something in the article to explain why the muzzle flash is being reduced.
 
I've added a flash, and the 10mm ammo has been approved for a while as part of the S6-P2 Wraith submission it was originally made for. I believe it was just never marked as such. @Syaoran
 
Okay I went through and did a grammar and spelling check. It's good now. But when doing it I noticed that you had put the muzzle flash information in the 'projectile appearance' line, so I moved and merged the lines and then filled in projectile appearance. Let me know if you like that as it is now and then it can be approved.
 
[ ✅ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✅ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ✅ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✅ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✅ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ✅ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✅ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✅ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✅ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Alright well this is APPROVED
 
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