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Approved Submission S6-HPT-1 "Dragon's Breath"

Ametheliana

Sensei
Staff Member
Submissions Reviewer
FM of Nepleslia
FM of the Iromakuanhe
Game Master
Things that can be linked should be linked. The intro paragraph is a glaring example of this.

Sub-headers require text underneath them and before bullet points.
 

Ametheliana

Sensei
Staff Member
Submissions Reviewer
FM of Nepleslia
FM of the Iromakuanhe
Game Master
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ✔ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✔ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ✔ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ❌ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✔ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ ✔ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✔ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ✔ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ❌ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✔ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Here's some fixes this article still needs:

There were a number of spelling, grammar, and linkage errors that I have already fixed. The wiki has red lines under the words spelled wrong, which can really help the writer know what is right and what is rong. Get it? hah. Anyway, one thing I couldn't fix is that one one of the charts still has vestigial remnants of the template here:
"(Insert Ammo Name/Weapon Name for Firing Modes) Damage Quickchart"

Also, pick a tier as 2-4 isn't feasible.
 
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