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Approved Submission S6 Plasma grenade

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At present, the article doesn't meet the style guidelines. To fix this, you'll want to make sure there's an overview paragraph (or sentence) after the title header. You could probably use the Clothing Item template to format this article.
 
@Wes there is that top picture is just inbetween the header and paragraph.

Edit: image moved to below the paragraph
 
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Similar to what I did for the Frag Grenade, I added that the 40mm version of the S6-PG has dimensions of 40mm by 46mm (based upon the IRL 40mm grenade), @Jack Pine - and you're free to change them if you want; I was just trying to save you a bit of work. >.<

[ ✔️ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ✔️ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ✔️ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✔️ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ✔️ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ✔️ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ✔️ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ✔️ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✔️ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✔️ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Here are some fixes this article still needs:
  1. Like the Frag Grenade, I have a really minor request: would you mind adding the grenade's blast radius, please? (15 meters for the hand grenade and 10 meters for the 40mm, maybe?)
When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!

Status: Pending
 
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Apologies for the delay, @Jack Pine - had a rather...rough day IRL yesterday.

[ ✔️ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ✔️ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ✔️ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✔️ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ✔️ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ✔️ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ✔️ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ✔️ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✔️ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✔️ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Status: Approved

Thanks again for submitting an article to the wiki! Time for some final steps for the reviewer...

[ ✔️ ] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread
[ ✔️ ] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki
[ ✔️ ] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to
[ ✔️ ] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section
[ ✔️ ] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)
 
Would you mind changing the S6-PG’s listed purpose to Tier 3 (Heavy Anti-Personnel), please, @Jack Pine? I know I approved it as Tier 4, and I apologize for any inconvenience this might cause - it’s just that after having more time to think about it I realized that the grenade’s current tier makes it overpowered when compared to other hand grenades in the setting.
 
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