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Approved Submission S6-PR "Avenger" plasma rifle

Alex Hart

Site Supporter
Submissions Reviewer
Game Master
Manager of Origin Industries
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...
[ ✅ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✅ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ✅ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✅ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✅ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ ✅ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✅ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ❌ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✅ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Here's some fixes this article still needs:
1. The damage rating is too high for a non-PA/exosuit exclusive at this RPM. I'd like to suggest that you implement two firing modes, light mode, which is full (300 RPM) or burst fire (5 round burst) at tier 2 and heavy mode, which is tier 3 at 75-90 RPM
2. The ranges on this are kind of funny, with the range currently being higher than that of your heavy sniper rifle, can you explain why?
 

Jack Pine

Staff Member
FM of S6
Game Master
i believe if you had checked the page before the checklist, you will find the damage has already been lowered to T2. If you wish that the rpm be raised to 300, then I will. I have lowered the range per your request.
 

Alex Hart

Site Supporter
Submissions Reviewer
Game Master
Manager of Origin Industries
My mistake, when I was doing the review I don't think I had reloaded the page to see the new damage rating, so I was looking at an old version of the page. What does T3 ablative damage mean in terms of this submission? 4 or 5 shots doing damage roughly equivalent to T3?
 

Alex Hart

Site Supporter
Submissions Reviewer
Game Master
Manager of Origin Industries
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...
[ ✅ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✅ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ✅ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✅ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✅ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ ✅ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✅ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✅ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✅ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

APPROVED
 

Alex Hart

Site Supporter
Submissions Reviewer
Game Master
Manager of Origin Industries
Thanks again for submitting an article to the wiki! Time for some final steps for the reviewer...
[ ✅ ] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread
[ ✅ ] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki
[ ✅ ] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to
[ ✅ ] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section
[ ✅ ] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)
 
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