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Approved Submission [SAoY] Mini-missile, Type 41

Soban

Game Master
Convention Veteran
Submission URL
https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=stararmy:weapons:mini-missiles_type_41
Submission Faction(s)
Yamatai (except Elysia)
Submission Terms
I agree
This was orignally the munition for the Tailpack, but wes suggested that we make its own thread for it.

One thing I'll note is that they are about a foot long and a third of that in diamiter. Something that I noticed is that Mini-missile sizes vary depending on type. So you can have a shoulder mini-missile that is a few feet long to ones that are only a few inches long. I went for what I thought was reasonable, but we may need to change the size of the missile.
 

Wes

Founder & Admin
Staff Member
FM of Yamatai
Game Master
STO Fleet Member
I've updated the destination URL to meet naming standards and to be plural since we're going to refer to these in quantity in most cases. I changed the title header to be the standard capitalization.

As a request, I would like the visual appearance of each missile to be described. I think a color pattern (like a stripe or colored nose) could be used to differentiate various types with similar appearances. Also I would need this for getting art made for them.
 

Ametheliana

Sensei
Staff Member
Submissions Reviewer
FM of Nepleslia
FM of the Iromakuanhe
Game Master
I fixed some hyphenation (short-lived) and linked aether. Can you also put some explanation text underneath stats? Not a big deal.

Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ✔ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✔ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ✔ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✔ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✔ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ ✔ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✔ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ✔ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✔ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✔ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Approved
 
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