Approved Submission [SAoY] Universal Hemosynthetic Fabrication System Type 43

[Andrew]

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=stararmy:systems:universal_fabrication_system_type_43

Submission Faction(s)

1. Yamatai (except Elysia)

Submission Terms

1. I agree

An Add on for the NLCS.

@Wes

 

[Whisper]

I'll take this one on. I feel like this is a pretty major upgrade to the Star Army's ability to build in and repair their ships, so I'm going to put it up for a 3 day approval timer and wait for @Wes to chime in.

That said, this seems very cool! I'll work on the review portion today.

 

[Andrew]

Also, I tried to include a guide to GMs and Technicians so they can actually use this in their RPs. I hope that was helpful.

 

[Whisper]

[ ✅ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✅ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ✅ ] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✅ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✅ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ✅ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✅ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and credited in the OOC section
[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✅ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✅ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Pending the 3 day wait I mentioned before, the rest looks good! When the time runs out, I'll finish up the Approved process.

 

[Andrew]

@Whisper 3-day timer has expired.

 

[Whisper]

I'll try to wrap this up this evening. My computer and the rest of my stuff are still mostly boxed up at this point. If you'd like to finalize it on my behalf, feel free!

 

[Andrew]

@Whisper I'd like to toss this as a subpage because its a list of minor equipment that can be fabricated using the system

• @Wes and I have been experimenting with these minor struct lists for the really minor products that don't need entire wiki pages devoted to them.

Star Army Minor Science Equipment on Star Army Space Roleplay

(will link it in once you say what you got to)

 

[Whisper]

The list looks good. As a player/reader I don't like pagination on lists of this type, so it might be nice to bump the max items to 20-30? That's a personal preference thing more than a reviewer thing, so I'll leave it up to you.

Approved.

 

[Whisper]

Couple quick things I noticed while wrapping up -

• I'm not sure if 'Type 43' is appropriate nomenclature or not. I think you'd know better than I would, but it seems outside the usual format.
• I'm not sure how best to handle the struct details on the list page so I've left that blank for now. I think that's appropriate since it's a list of other items, but am curious about your thought there.

Still approved, etc.

 

[Andrew]

@Whisper just for you I made the pagination max 30.
Usually, type 43 comes in when there isn't an appropriate standard option for this. I think in terms of nomenclature there are going to be some categories that get expanded. It also isn't designed for any single ship design.

 

[Whisper]

Thanks!

I wasn't sure if they had to be unique or not. I see where you're coming from, so I'll trust you and Wes to know the best way to handle the nomenclature.