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Approved Submission [Section 6] "Executioner" Shotgun + subsonic shotgun ammo

Syaoran

Staff Member
Submissions Reviewer
FM of Abwehr
Game Master
@Jack Pine will need to approve this article yes. As for things that need to be done though:
  • You need to list on yoru page somewhere easily noticeable that the Magnum shells are for power armor levels of strength you, especially since the page says this gun took care to be usable without power armor.
  • Also the effective range needs fixing. Right not it says slugs go 400 meters when that's only the magnum slug. So it needs to be more accurate or just state that its variable depending on the shell.
Right now that's all I'm really noticing that needs to be touched up.
 

Syaoran

Staff Member
Submissions Reviewer
FM of Abwehr
Game Master
My bad I actually did not notice that tag. Alright then it's just those things then.
 

SirSkully

FM of S6
Game Master
Yeah apologies for those few oversights, they have been fixed now though (partially thanks to Wes fixing up the range and recoil, though I made a minor change to what he had put down under recoil)

Should be all good to go now @Syaoran
 

Syaoran

Staff Member
Submissions Reviewer
FM of Abwehr
Game Master
I just made a small edit to the range info in the discharge information section


[ ✅ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✅ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ✅ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✅ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✅ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ ✅ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✅ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✅ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✅ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

So gonna give this APPROVED stamp. As well as approving the ammo.
 
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