I have a few notes to have.
My first was alarm at the surname "Stark", which is one of the major families portrayed in the 'Game of Thrones' TV series. I understand it could've come from nowhere, but that's the first time that came to my mind which could have a negative impact (just like calling your character Drizzt, JamesTKurk or Legolas in some online game).
Secondly, we try to make a few references to gods as possible within SARP. In his physical description, there's a reference to him loosing his 'god-given' pair of eyes.
Also, considering his family: nepleslian women are rather uncommon. Having a mother and a sister to make an actual family unit can happen, but is out of the ordinary. That doesn't require any changes - just telling you things as I see them.