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The latest and greatest extreme thrill adventure experience from Yugumo Corporation.
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Approved Submission Storm Chasers: A Yugumo Venture
- Thread starter Yuuki
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Syaoran
Retired Staff
Alright don't really see anything troubling with this. Just some confusion
- This is later down the page but easier to handle, can you give us a rough estimate of how many of each vehicle the company owns, as well as a rough estimate of employees at the top in the "general information" section.
- The packages are kinda vague, to the point that I'm not sure if they are facilities at different locations where you stay for your trip or what. I would suggest actually explaining what services are actually being purchased in each package.
Syaoran
Retired Staff
Sorry I couldn't get to this yesterday. Looking at the changes, I just want to be clear about something, there are separate hotels for each of the different packages in different locations? Are tehse 'generic' resort hotels or are there any special accommodations/features in them?
Updated, the relevant information is under Facilities
Syaoran
Retired Staff
Okay let's go ahead and get this APPROVED
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] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores[
] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template[
] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.[
] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar[
] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken[
] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels[
] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)[
] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.[
] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.[
] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
