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Approved Submission Updated Isolated Computer Pad for SAOY

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I made a few grammar and spelling corrections, as well as changing a little bit of the formatting, having those large spaces between lines at the start didn't look too good so I converted it into a bulleted list.

If you like how it looks now we can get this approved.
 
Alright then this will be APPROVED

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Okay I just tried to move this and it turns out there is pretty much the exact same article already? Are you planning on having this new article overwrite the old one?
 
Yes, there is no need to keep the old one in service

In fact I added a statement that the G2-E4200 replaces the G2-E3100
 
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If it is a different item we need to keep both.
 
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