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Approved Submission UX-27 Revamp

RaWolfe

RaWolfe

Retired Staff
Submission URL
https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=system:ux-27
Submission Faction(s)
  1. None (nebulas, etc.)
Submission Terms
  1. I agree
Good day,

I did my best to revamp the UX-27 page, the general idea is to give it more structure, better view and will additionally be used for the RP or potential RP in the future. Now I know there is not much content on the planet pages, but 1) I went with the information that was there (only Aeon found it and it was recorded) and 2) I kinda wish to see it slowly be RP'd out.

I used my sandbox page to create the article, so please don't remove that page :) I presume (might be wrong) that I tag @Andrew and @Wes for this? Thanks in advance for the review :)
 
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Hi, @Wes for FM approval, then I will start the review for you!
 
This is a good start to the overhaul of this system. It would be nice to see some full-blown locations developed as it becomes more developed. Remember to add history and things of interest as you go. Normally I'd look for a few minor places defined on each planet but since I know this will expand as you work on what you have here. I'd say its fine.

Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ✅ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✅ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ✅ ] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✅ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✅ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ✅ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✅ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✅ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✅ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Approved.

In the future please don't use this "sandbox" thing. Pages should be made in the WIP namespace so they can just be moved to their proper namespace after approval.
 
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