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Approved Submission [Yamatai] M19 Ryoko Mecha

Andrew

SARP WikiGuru and Staff. Here to serve!
I will take this since I was the one who asked for it like this. Reviewer Assigned.
 

Andrew

SARP WikiGuru and Staff. Here to serve!
Just an update, this review is in progress. Just am taking my time going through it.
 

Andrew

SARP WikiGuru and Staff. Here to serve!
I've been taking my time going through this. I feel that a new Mecha for the SAoY is a big deal.

I think the concept and the submissions are very well laid out. You can tell you put a lot of work into this to meet the site's standards and to make it something that a player can get into. The reason I wanted it submitted as the complete picture is that sometimes approving accessories before what they go on is a slippery slope. I think the weapons load-outs are balanced and they make sense.

That being said, I would like to put a 3-day approval Timer (1/21/2021 @0930) just so that if there are some other Yamatai players or Wes want weigh-in (because it is such an iconic submission for his faction) they can do so.

I will post the Checklist when the timer expires.
 

Andrew

SARP WikiGuru and Staff. Here to serve!
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ✅ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✅ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and the article template. Is all the information for struct present?
[ ✅ ] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✅ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✅ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ✅ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ✅ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and credited in the OOC section.
[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✅ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✅ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Approved
 

Andrew

SARP WikiGuru and Staff. Here to serve!
Moved out of WIP and marked approved, I will fill out struct when I'm done eating.
 

Wes

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The price of this on the wiki was listed as 8 KS, or the cost of a cheeseburger combo meal, so I've removed the price until a legit one can be set.
 
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