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Approved Submission [Yamatai] Separa'Shan Templar

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Hey Soban, great to see some Essian stuff :)

[ ✔️ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ✔️ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ✔️ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✔️ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ✔️ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ✔️ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ N/A ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ✔️ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ N/A ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ X ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Looks all good to me. I changed up some misspellings and grammatical issues myself to save you some time. Feel free to look them over.

Once @Wes drops his approval here I'll go ahead and send this on its way.

NEEDS FM APPROVAL
 
I don't understand why a moderator added approval to a non-OOC section before it's approved, but don't do that.

Are you asking for the approval of the Elysian Defense Force sub-article despite there being no changes to it by you, @Soban ?
 
Are you asking for the approval of the Elysian Defense Force sub-article despite there being no changes to it by you, @Soban ?
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No. I would not consider the EDF to be a sub-article of this, but a sub-article of the general Separa'Shan or even the Templar being a sub-article of the EDF. It was there before I got to it. It's one that does probably need to be approved eventually, but I haven't worked on yet so I'm not submitting it for approval. It's on my list to work on which I'm very slowly working my way through.
 
There seems to be a bit of confusion, because there is two different organizations using EDF Elysian Defense Force, and the Essian Defense Force. It might be a good idea to come up with a different name for the Essian force to avoid confusion.
Other than that, I don't see a problem with the article
 
Yhea, renaming the EDF is something that's going to take thought and at least one post on the Separa'Shan thread. I don't even really have any good ideas ATM.
 
I still haven't come up with a good name for a completely different article that hasn't been submitted yet.
 
Ah, okay. Uhm...would you be averse to removing the sentence that mentions the EDF, @Soban? It could always be added back in at a later date once its article is approved.
 
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