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--- faction:hidden_sun_clan:exo_skel:battle_bear [2023/12/21 04:22] – external edit 127.0.0.1
+++ faction:hidden_sun_clan:exo_skel:battle_bear [2024/03/29 21:11] (current) – Rewrote some text in [History] to make it clearer, fix grammer, fix a redlink. (Nashoba project) hollander
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 ==== History ====
-None of the previous versions were still in service when the HS-M3-4a went into development. Working from the blueprints for the 3a the //[[faction:hidden_sun_clan:occupation:engineer]]// team looked up historical accounts and identified areas for improvement.
+None of the previous versions were still in service when the HS-M3-4a went into development. Working from the blueprints for the 3a, [[faction:hidden_sun_clan:occupation:scientist|scientists]] used historical accounts to identify areas for improvement.
-In addition the team also looked at upgrading the design with newer technologies that were developed since they were discontinued.
+In addition, the team also looked at upgrading the design with newer technologies that were developed since they were discontinued.
 ==== Appearance ====

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