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I'm going to need to see the changes made in the article before I could make a call on the damage rating. I think chondrex. The way it's descibed in the article, only major manufacturers can use yarvex. So, unless you want Ketsurui Fleetyards to be the one to make it and distribute it to...

So it might feel like everyone should start shooting at the enemies I explicitly detailed because who doesn't like doing that, but opening the door? Eh, eh? @raz @Gunhand4171 @Gles @Nameless

"Bad impact? Your femtomachines should start working on repairing that. Huh, we got to get you training with Aiko's samurai if you're hurting yourself," Hoshi responded. At the mention of the Ketsurui royalty, Hoshi's attention went to Aiko as she took out scaffolding above the crate in the...

Okay, can you describe the boosters and concussion model outside of the replaceable parts sections? That way they're described elsewhere in the article and add to that future tech vibe! Your grammar is really good and not noticeably bad, just the capitalization stuff! I think Yarvex fits, but...

"Make it work!" Shinrin repeated Aliset's own words, but with a more concerned and direct tone. Her brain was already whirring up the mechanisms for STing a Senti. Pullingthat portion of her mind in the newly minted medical bay, she fired off another order. "Taii, hang back and provide support...

Marking as approved

We like to have weapon or technologies that are created in current year onward. Perhaps consider making this the most recent iteration of the design? That leads me to ask, is there a way to "sci fi" this up? Maybe the concussion modification is such, but I don't see anything beyond one mention...

I don't think it was in error. The shoulder-fired missile pod should be able to take out small enemy mecha in its description and tier 7 does that. These two mini-missiles simply have different utility than one another.

For @Gles I drew Molli, who I adore in RP and drawing!

Hoshi was last out and bringing up the rear for a reason which presented itself immediately after Sif took on the Delsaurian. "Hey, now," the little captain said as she went to Sif's good side. She pulled the other Neko up by the elbow and then put her hand under Sif's red jacket, on her waist...

Looks good and well-fleshed out. If she is an armorer that has gone through SAINT training and became an operative, she'd be entitled to have a black panel with SAINT as her occupation. She's a former armorer who is an operative after INDOC.

Ohayou, Okaizou!!

Mind changing this line "SAINT leadership selected her to join the organization's elite La Prossima task force." up a bit since I don't know how true that'd be?

I know you didn't, but I'm saying she's a sociopath based on the many behaviors described. I don't really see anything changed that makes her Star Army eligible, still. If anything, you added more reason for her to not be eligible with the schadenfreude addition. If you want to write a...

There are a few things, but I'm not going to nitpick the small stuff (like how a MEGAMI system would filter out bugs before they get onto a ship): Mental illness is a disqualifying factor for recruitment and she has escalating OCD SAINT leadership would be played by me, I don't think I'd say...

Gosh, thank you all for coming out yesterday for the JP. It was so fun to try something new like a purely social JP and I am so stoked everyone had fun and it was worth their time, I think! (I say all because even the couple that couldn't make it have been communicating so much and so well with...

That punch William threw might cause the other man to reel from shock, but still be in the fight—if William were human. The ID-SOL packed a punch, though, and the technician was laying cold on the ground. Rob gave Aiko a look with his wet eyes, one of understanding and acceptance. When he didn’t...

Can I adopt this character @Wes? She was a bridge bunny for Kaiyo and one of the best PCs to do it, I'd like to bring her back aboard. I even talked with BRI when she was adopted and he wouldn't play her again if he came back (but is welcome to).

Apparently this is GW or gold bikini week. Aiko always has her pulse on the trends, huh?

Deciding if you want to play in a plot is the first step, then which one. We have plenty and they're all in factions that an Iromakuanhe could reasonably be in, though the last Iromakuanhe plot had one of the site's worst GMs haha (me) so it's not running any longer. He could be mad because he...