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Mr. Farzi,

I've noted you have several pending submissions that are interconnected. It is great a new player that you're enthusiastic, and willing to throw yourself to the critic and scrutiny we place on submissions to our setting. Your submissions are welcome of course, but they have a common thread. They lack wikification (other links to things in the setting), and show that some time is going to need to be invested on your part to learn the setting. I think that if you give some time to learn the SARPiverse these will become submissions with work that we can eventually integrate, but at this time I would like to notify you that they will be considered pending until you learn about our universe enough to meld these in. I encourage you, continue to take the time to get to know the lore, your fellow SARPers. Ask for help, come talk to one of our Staff members, consult the wiki on existing factions, and for our guides on making them. I would suggest making sure if you have not already to take some time to join an existing faction to learn more about the universe and expectations. We are all here to help you with your SARP journey!

Pending until submission guidelines are met.
 
Same as the others, The design is not problematic -

  • If you could put this into the power armor template though, cleaning up the top part of the article, it would make this reviewer really happy. Power Armor Template on Star Army Space Roleplay
  • Some of your wikification needs help, use internal link syntax instead of external when linking inside of the wiki.

If you need a hand just let me know.

  • We also need an RP example, maybe do an RP that shows this and the other tech you're introducing?
 
Sent you a message on this and the other submissions. Going to get the group to step in and help you out with these articles to get them up to standard. For now, I will just put them on hold.
 
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