StrikeWyvernX02S
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- Elysia
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- I agree
Burst Barrier System to weaponize your birb vehicle's barrier! (also the main system for the mech that im working on)
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Approved Submission Burst Barrier
- Thread starter StrikeWyvernX02S
- Start date
Andrew
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Hi Strike,
I think this is your first or one of your first submissions, hopefully, we can help you get your concept here to where it can be approved.
I am looking forward to seeing this concept fleshed out and brought to the appoint where it can be approved.
I think this is your first or one of your first submissions, hopefully, we can help you get your concept here to where it can be approved.
- The article lacks a history and background section required for all article types.
- The article needs wikification meaning that there are links to other wiki pages (Things like the dates, the names of factions, etc can all be linked to their respective articles).
- We need some actual information about the design itself in the article. This concept is good but it needs to be fleshed out. Some good articles to look at would be things like : Helstrom Plasma Cannon on Star Army Space Roleplay ,
I am looking forward to seeing this concept fleshed out and brought to the appoint where it can be approved.
StrikeWyvernX02S
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aights did some changes
StrikeWyvernX02S
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understandable and thank you
