Approved Character [Motoyoshi Rising] Motoyoshi Zabuza

[Hollander]

Recognizing that the plot is on temporary hiatus, I'm still enthusiastic about applying to participate if/when it re-opens!

I do have the required NSFW access.

This character can also be submitted to other Yugumo and Motoyoshi plots in the meanwhile.

Tagging @Andrew (acknowledging they're on hiatus of course) and @Yuuki in the interim.

I would adore any and all feedback, thoughts on things to make better, etc! Here or on Discord is fine and dandy.

Link: Motoyoshi Zabuza on Star Army Space Roleplay

 

[Andrew]

I will let @Yuuki have the say on this one.

 

[Wes]

I'm really impressed by the well-researched history! No one expected a dark horse Motoyoshi clan member but damn, you seem to be earning it!

 

[Yuuki]

If @Andrew thinks the starting rank is good, lieutenant instead of cadet, then it's all good!

 

[Nakshatra]

 APPROVED

 

[Yuuki]

I overlooked that all of the Azure Knights are in the Kikyō Scouts Troop 1712 “Sea Saints”

@demibear we probably need an RP to get the rest of the troop their Pathfinder badges

 

[Hollander]

Alright, with your permission, I updated the history to reflect his membership in the Kikyo Scouts!

Edit: I also got a link to this approval thread in the OOC section of his page.