Arcangèlo Heavy Armor

[Aendri]

Submission Type: Powered Armor / Mecha
Submission URL: Here.

Faction: Elysia
FM Approved Yet? Yes. (Will have absolutely no interaction with Yamatai itself or the SAoY, so I'm assuming I don't need permission on this one)

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes, Alternate Transphasic Rifle
Previously Submitted? No

Notes: This is very much so a unique production item. Like it says on the page, only 14 will be produced grand total, with two of those being prototypes that have been dismantled and are no longer of any use. I understand that it is fairly powerful, but it's intended to essentially be a straight out bossfight.

On top of that, all 12 of the active armor systems will be located in a single, stationary location, with a specific purpose, and won't be moved around or used anywhere but at the Great Temple.

This is a item meant specifically for the plot, and there are a couple details about it and it's use that I'll be glad to share with any of the reviewers who wish, but I don't want to post them in here in case one of my PCs is looking.

 

[Kyle]

Loooked this over a few times, didn't see anything that jumped out at me that was a cause for concern.

I did see the bad picture, but Aendir has told me thats only there as a reminder for him to get one up. So it's not something I'll dock him on.

Thus, approved

 

[Wes]

I'm disappointed this was approved with so many items on the checklist that were not present, such as the year of manufacture, the overview sentence that starts the page, and a broken image link. I have edited the page to help improve its shortcomings and also fixed a huge number of word usage errors "'it's" instead of "its."

Please do not use the contraction "it's" in articles if you have trouble using the possessive "its."

 

[FrostJaeger]

Added OOC Notes to the article.