Alright, so far, there's a few grammatical errors here and there - you can have them ignored, but if you like, I can pick as many of them out as I can for you. Also, as an aside, I do happen to wonder if you've made a picture with the solar sails unfurled yet.
Anyways, I think that "Food Ration and Repair Supplies Dependent" would be nicer for the Range section, but that's up to you. Overall, the article is good, but somehow feels messy in a way I can't quite pin down. I'll likely figure that out next post I make though. Maybe with the sensor bullet points, use parenthesis with shorter descriptions like "Graviton Detector" or something. Regarding the mention of its "Spacial Distortion Mesh", could you link it in if it's in an article already? If it's been previously approved as part of ships like this though, you can likely whip up a quick page with a paragraph or two to explain and link to instead. Besides that, I noticed that the type of shielding the ship uses isn't specified. You'll need to do that. However, if the shielding is weaker than the ship's hull rating, you'll have to specifically point that too.
One other thing I noticed about the article however, is that the individual parts or rooms of the ship don't have descriptions or articles it seems. Though you can continue like this, the areas will be very vague in RP, and it's generally not recommended unless you're making NPCs or something.
