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Approved Submission Hybrids

Ace

Ace

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Submission Type: Species
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:species:hybrid

Faction: Psychopomp/Nepleslian
FM Approved Yet? (Yes/No; Who, When): No
Faction requires art? (Yes/No): Maybe

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? (Yes/No): No
Contains New art? (Yes/No): No
Previously Submitted? (Yes/No; explain reason if rejected): No

Notes: First Species if I'm missing anything important let me know. I did remove some sections as there was nothing to put in them. (i.e: Economy) Also I will be trying to make a Psychopomp FM page in the future but for now Psychopomp is a Nepleslian company so I will have to have @Gunhand4171 approve this as well.
 
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There is an unbalanced text to header ratio. You need more text than headers in this submission. I will give it another look once you do that.
 
I believe that should do it. Though if its not needed I would like to remove the Culture and Language sections
 
It's still way too sparse. I can help you out when I get home, but this needs to have paragraphs, not sentences, to describe each thing. Species pages should be well-detailed.
 
Ok thanks. Sorry I've never done this before and once I sat down to start brain storming it became painfully clear that I didn't know the first thing about this.
 
Well I think @Zack has offered to help. How about you set up a group convo between the three of us and we can brainstorm together?
 
Their life span is pretty long. What is the justification behind it?

"...near subzero temperatures and in heat below 550 degrees Celsius..." Did you mean heat above 550 degrees?

Link YE 39.
 
The justification for the long life cycle is that Psychopomp used genes with longer life spans so that they wouldn't have to replace the bodies due to old age since the process is long and expensive. I meant it to say below 550 because that is the highest temperature they can handle. if you want me to change those I can though.
 
550 seems too high but I don't know what I would say the limit is. Maybe it should just say they have increased heat tolerance but not give a number value?
 
Yeah I just put down 550 because it was a pretty high number. It's equal to around a thousand degrees Fahrenheit.
 
I just searched up the highest temperature ever recorded on Earth and it's 134° Fahrenheit. So does 250° Fahrenheit sound good?
 
Hey sorry... Didn't get alerts for this thread D:

I'd still like the age of them to go down. Even with great gene splicing, they wouldn't be able to be that old.

I don't think the wiki reflects the changes you said you made. It still says 550.
 
Can we get a better name for these? Hybrid is incredibly generic.

Also, is Psychopomp trying to mess with Nekovalkyrja or Minkan DNA?
 
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