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[Iromakuanhe] Gravitic Boundary System

It seems like any more description and you are risking violating some laws of physics. I also dislike 'gravitons' but I think we've already established that they are in this setting in other submissions. I also dislike that this is a very complex energy intensive solution for what can be done with velcro or magnets.

It is weird saying this but I think that the best thing for this submission would be to include less description, namely make the how it works bit more general by saying it generates gravitational fields rather than gravitons or by using advanced particle physics. When it comes to artificial gravity systems in this setting suspension of disbelief is really on your side.

Of course you probably should wait for a mod to say something rather than listening to this.
 
The thing is short, sweet, to the point. And I see no issues.

This Submission is Approved for IC Usage.
 
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