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[New Race] Einharian/Einhariyar

renako

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Jun said that if I wanted a new race, I need to post it here. So I guess I try my luck, if it isn't approve...Guess I could always come up with something else XDD

Note: It isn't complete, I am posting it here because I wish to see what everyone think of it first...If this is the wrong place to post, I beg your forgiveness...;_;

PS: It's is rather mess up too...Yeah, techno is below page but I fixed it later ^^ Comments on improvement are really need =3

Made and Created by the Great Ebil Renako, Screamer of Cheese!

Einharian/Einhariyar
Home World: Origin Ein (Another time space)
Goverment: No leadership
Population: Estimated more than 79 billions

General:

The Einharians are entity that watches many parts of the world quietly, thus the reason why they were never discovered for a long time. The Einharians, now discovered, are known for their highly sophiscated technologies which no one can truely understand how most of them works. The Einharians are a friendly race that treats everything equally, dispite having destructive weapons, the Einharians strive to protect the world instead of destroying it or controlling it.

Due to the different law of existance, an Einhariyar is near to unkillable. They are able to survive gigantic explosion, live in space without any protection or surviving without resources. The only way to "Eleminate" one of such being is the immediate use of Phase/Shift Wave weaponry or large amount of energy. (Example : Legacy cannon etc >_>)

The Einharians isn't much willing to pass most of their knowledge to the beings in this world, of fear that they might destroy themselves one of these days. The Einharians, however, gladly gave the power that can even eleminate themselves ; The Phase Wave and Shift Wave.

The Einharians scout the vast space with this policy : Never get involve with any fights unless pervoked without valid reason.

Appearance:Look just like a normal human on the period in Earth, a history way before. All Einharians are beautiful by nature and possess the fastest regeneration speed of all ; Faster Than Light. (Example: You shoot off their hand, but the hand is still there and yet another drop to the ground.) They are usually of normal builds and one of the few way to seperate the looks of a Gashrin to an Einhariyar is the sublet radient shine in their eyes.

Culture:

All Einharians, when borned, are immediatly infused with forbbiden knowledge through birth naturaly. An Einhariyar can chose
to stay as a child forever or an adult, they can change between their age standard anytime they want, but not their sex.An Einhariyar can chose whether or not to join the army, regardless of sex or popularity inside their world, once inside the army, they will be sent towards any Fleet Command looking for members. If all Fleet Command are not expanding at all, a new Platoon would be opened for the new members.

In the Einharian's world, there is no law and it might seen as if they were controlled by its own military but that is not the case. Each and every Einhariyar knew where they stand and what they should do, like ants in a colony but without the Queen.

Althought the Einharians have never really gotten into a war or any fights, they are always prepared to engage any form of hostility.

The Einharians prefer cool and soft clothing to tight or hot clothings.

Normal Civillian: The normal civillian usually wore a big shirt which doesn't seem to fit their size, not really a trend but the Einharians love that kind of clothings because it kept them cool during the eternal summer season in Origin Ein. If ever an Einharian decides to go shopping or whatever reason needed to venture out of their home, most likely they be just wearing anything that they feel like it...Like a human? Yes I guess...

Working Parties: Even in Origin Ein, where nothing is needed for survival...There is still work to be done. Such as keeping watch on different worlds that has fallen into war or making entertainment products for everyone. Everything is technically free in Origin Ein, just that you have to work to get it yourself...Unless your friends are free enough to help you with them.

Military: Einharians Military would be the most laxed ever known, a private can throw a pie at the Commander's face without getting killed and they will only laugh it off. It is only during the mission time that everyone started getting tensed and serious, only at a few allocated location inside headquaters or vessels are they allow to relax again. The standard Einharian is equipped with a Shift Blade and a Phase Pistol, their usual uniform's colour is dependent on which fleetment's order they are under.

Ein First Fleetment

Uniform: Blue coat
Standard Equipment:
Shift blade x 1
Phase Pistol x 1
Shift Suit x 1
Gravity Glove x 2
Impulse Boot x2
Suicider's Cross x 1


Ein Second Fleetment

Uniform: Red coat
Standard Equipment:
Standard Equipment:
Shift blade x 1
Phase Pistol x 1
Shift Suit x 1
Gravity Glove x 2
Impulse Boot x2
Suicider's Cross x 1


Ein Third Fleetment

Uniform: Whtie coat
Standard Equipment:
Shift blade x 1
Phase Pistol x 1
Shift Suit x 1
Gravity Glove x 2
Impulse Boot x2
Suicider's Cross x 1


Ein Fourth Fleetment

Uniform: Black coat
Standard Equipment:
Shift blade x 1
Phase Pistol x 1
Shift Suit x 1
Gravity Glove x 2
Impulse Boot x2
Suicider's Cross x 1


Ein Archetype Platoon

Uniform: Scientist Jacket
Standard Equipment:
Shift blade x 1
Phase Pistol x 1
Transit Work Unit x 1


Ein Right Flank Unit

Uniform: Casual Clothings
Standard Equipment:
NIVAX Beam Riffle x 1
Phase Pistol x 1
Shift blade x 1
Suicider's Cross x 1
Time-Space Granade x 3


Ein Left Flank Unit

Uniform: Casual Clothings
Standard Equipment:
NIVAX Beam Riffle x 1
Phase Pistol x 1
Shift blade x 1
Suicider's Cross x 1
Time-Space Granade x 3


Ein Center Command Fleetment

Uniform: Casual Clothings
Standard Equpiment:
Officer's Sword x 1 [Officer only]
Phase Gun x 1
Shift Blade x 1 [Normal Staff only]


Ein Privateer Scout Group

Uniform: Casual Clothings
Standard Equipment:
No Standard Equipment.


Society:

The Einharian's society trust in mutual peace, which is one of the few reason why Einharians is non-hostile. Unlike all normal "Living Beings", the Einharians are not considered alive or in existance because they have no energy reading nor atoms, dispite the fact that we can see them. An Einharian is "Born" when they wishes to be born, or so that seems. There is no class level withen the Einharians, nor is there slavery or anyone treated like animals, not even to war criminals. The Einharians are very forgiving in nature, no matter how big your crime is, as long as you can learn from your sins they will do nothing to stop you...But there is a limit in which they place their trust in you. They are also very cool-minded, some even deem them stupid after hours of swearing at them and they still ask you what you're trying to say.

Althought the Einharians are peaceful and kind in nature, which is a good quality, they somewhat lack common sense due to the fact that they have a child-like thoughts and most of them are only a few years old, well, most of them.

Technology:

The Einharians are so advanced that clearing a portion of space is nothing new to them. There is a legend of how Einharians came to obtain such great knowledge from birth -Stuff put in History-. The most notable technologies of the Einharians are the Phase Wave, Shift Wave, Vortex Amplfication, Realm of Imaginary Numbers and their ships.


Phase Wave: An energy wave length found in the Realm of Imaginary Numbers, where existance does not existed yet it does. Phase wave is an uncountable power source which is unlimited, it is also known as the Will of Rejection. Currently, the Einharians group Phase Wave into three kinds ; Phase Deletion, Phase Invoke and Phase Flow. Phase Wave cannot be detected.

Phase Deletion: Deletion of any matter, energy or space using Phase Wave. This deletion is bring forth through a series of Gradient Distortion that turns the outline of an object to an unfitted unit data and is slowly thrown in the time of space. It's unknown whether the space used to store the objects deleted by Phase Wave can ever be filled or it could exist like Origin Ein, a world which never ends.

Phase Invoke: Invoksion of Phase Wave which provides unlimited energy. The invoksion of Phase Wave is usually used to power ships or weaponry that requires large amount of power. The basic thoery of Phase Invoke is that Power = work done/time x Infinity divided by acceleration of space-time. If Phase Wave was to used with an Einharian weapon, most likely apon firing, a 500m shockwave will explode from the tip of the firing point horizontally, anything near it will undergo Phase Deletion. Phase weaponry is not a force to be reckon with, a Special Ops Ein frigate is able to blow up two and a half planet the size of Earth at full power.

Phase Flow: The neutralisation effect of Phase Wave and Shift Wave. Energy produced by each indivisual wave "Devours" one another among with anything near it, transmuting the energy back to the Realm of Imaginary Numbers and matters that doesn't belong there will be return back to their original dimension as stable energy wave.


Shift Wave: An energy wave length found in the Realm of Imaginary Numbers, where existance does not existed yet it does. Shift Wave is an uncountable power source which is unlimited, it is also known as the Will of Acceptance. The Einharians group Shift Wave into five kinds ; Shift Altitude, Shift Line, Shift Invoke, Shift Flow and Shift Coat. Shift Wave cannot be detected.

Shift Altitude: Using Shift Wave as a form of matter to fill up an entire area, once the area is filled, it can either be resize to any dimension it sees fit. An example would be this : An area of 100 x 100 x 100 is filled with Shift Wave, Shift Wave is used to enlarge area to 200 x 200 x 200. Anything withen it is enlarge by their own portional ratio. This technology itself is very dangerous, it is lethal to any matters and can either delete or compress them till nothingness. It does has its own advantage such as expanding space so that it can fill more things.

Shift Line: The line which seperates existance. This is used in the making of the Shift Array, a defense system which projects invisible shield around the vessel and can only be seen by the naked eyes when anything touches it. By seperating the physical existance from an object, it is free from the law of physic thus it is unable to produce any damage.

Shift Invoke: Unlike Phase Invoke, Shift Invoke absorb energy instead of producing energy. The invoksion of Shift Wave is performed when the Realm of Imaginary Numbers is granted physical law of existance in the dimension of this time-space. When the realm of Imaginary Numbers is in existance of this world, it produce a large endothermic reaction that suck in anything to its own dimension and can only be closed using Phase Wave.

Shift Flow: The neutralisation effect of Phase Wave and Shift Wave. Energy produced by each indivisual wave "Devours" one another among with anything near it, transmuting the energy back to the Realm of Imaginary Numbers and matters that doesn't belong there will be return back to their original dimension as stable energy wave.

Shift Coat: The usage of Shift Wave to coat an object. When the object is coated by Shift Wave, it forms a thin radient unseen line that seperate physical existance, which is the reason why a Shift Weaponry can perform such perfect cut or shot in the target.

Vortex Amplfication: An opening of a limited space that link towards the Realm of Imaginary Numbers. When opened, it causes a massive distortion of space-time and physic that everything become a bunch of mess up datas. It can only be opened using Phase Wave as a form "Key" that is used to insert into a invisible "Keyhole". Only the Einharians have the power to access this Vortex. When one enter's the vortex, nothing changes. Existance come to a stop and time freezes, the outside world does not move as long as you are inside there. The only way to get out is via Shift Wave to unlock the "Keyhole" again from the opposite side, once outside, everything continue as usual.

Realm of Imaginary Numbers: A dimension of non-existance yet existed as one. It follows another set of physic that is not included in this world nor is it known. First, we need to assume that even our world is made of numbers, you see a person as the number '1' then you see the '1' as another continuous number of 1 to 10 and so on and so forth. The Einharians so-called "Created" this Realm to obtain power when it is of non-existance. It is also the Einharian's beliefs that the Realm itself is just like our world, if we were to pass into the Realm, we will see the original dimension as numbers and vice versa.
 
Pandimensional hyper intelligent beings? I seriously doubt this will pass since they're basically demigods. Too perfect, too human (for pandimensional beings anyways), and most of all, waaaaaayy too powerful. You might as well add the i-Win button to their list of technology.

And another thing, just a general tip when writing races: Your technology section is just about as long as the rest of the article combined. You should put much greater emphasis and detail on culture and physiology since this is a race suggestion, not a technology guide.
 
I see that this is your 3rd post so far, no offense, but you must take into consideration that your new contributions must fit into the universe, not the universe fit into your contributions. And to do this you must understand the universe first.

I suggest you start off by making yourself a new character, then joining a plotship or do SPs. While you are at it, continue reading previous posts and topics. ( I have been here for more than a month, and I'm still scratching the iceberg).

When you start designing, try smaller mundane (but usefull) submissions and work your way up. Submissions containing high technology or overpowered things will be taken much more seriously if one already has a certain seniority.

Lastly, with a race as technologically advanced like that, you are going to have hell in explaining how every single piece of tech works alone. The higher the tech level, the more elaboration you have to give to back it up.

But though, I see you have put a lot of effort in this. It doesnt need to go to waste, keep it somewhere, and when you have the nessesary experience and support, bring it out again.

(A personal tip, I always run the concept of a submission through one of the older players for feasiblity tests before I seriously start work on it )

Keep it up!
 
The Star Army community has voted not to allow more "human but not" species. That aside, I don't think this is approvable; see the examples below:

All Einharians, when borned, are immediatly infused with forbbiden knowledge through birth naturaly. An Einhariyar can chose
to stay as a child forever or an adult, they can change between their age standard anytime they want
So they're like Q from Star Trek?

An energy wave length found in the Realm of Imaginary Numbers, where existance does not existed yet it does. Phase wave is an uncountable power source which is unlimited, it is also known as the Will of Rejection.
Made-up sources of unlimited energy will be rejected rather than approved.

Look just like a normal human on the period in Earth, a history way before. All Einharians are beautiful by nature and possess the fastest regeneration speed of all ; Faster Than Light. (Example: You shoot off their hand, but the hand is still there and yet another drop to the ground.)
Wow, physically impossible.

Realm of Imaginary Numbers: A dimension of non-existance yet existed as one. It follows another set of physic that is not included in this world nor is it known. First, we need to assume that even our world is made of numbers, you see a person as the number '1' then you see the '1' as another continuous number of 1 to 10 and so on and so forth. The Einharians so-called "Created" this Realm to obtain power when it is of non-existance. It is also the Einharian's beliefs that the Realm itself is just like our world, if we were to pass into the Realm, we will see the original dimension as numbers and vice versa.
What the fuck is this shit?

This is pretty much the most overpowered, game-destroying submission ever to be posted on the Star Army forums in the last 4 years. You need to step back and take a good, long look at your submission and then figure out your motivations for creating and posting it because that's where the problem lies. Why do you want your human to also be an invincible entity that is supposedly peaceful but with fleets of slackers that have instant annihilation weapons and invincible shields? Doesn't that seem a little messed up to you?
 
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Gah, knew it XP I couldn't really grasp the basic well yet I guess...

And yes, third post I know >_>;; Sorry for the trouble, but I don't think I can delete any messages now can I o_0? If no, please delete this for me, thank you very much.

It would be best if StarArmy's rp has a total rounded up info on the entire technology list. If you're saying about the sticky topic here first, which I knew of...All I need is the basic primary technology list ^^;; The entire thing is making it worst for me.

And yes Fian, I agree with you =P I already have a most likely reply from the admins in my heart. I be making my character if MM007's salvage system is fully up ^^ *Already has plans*

And erm...Wes, I already read that and a few months usually stand off to 2 - 4 months for me...Sorry =X

As for the Realm of Imaginary Numbers, it's a whacky idea from Xenosaga >_> And as for your comment on the entity stuff, it's very much like people looking to God...No religious issue about this, please.

Once again, I beg for everyone's forgiveness in making this a near to useless topic, it would be nice if someone sent me a PM or add me on msn and tell me about the technology stuff

msn: [email protected]

Edit: To Leutre,

You just gave me a great idea about the i-trend stuff going around in 4chan and most imageboard...i-win, mmhmm....Interesting! *Runs off to experiment with different image with i-win logo*
 
I think, perhaps, you overestimate us. S'alright.

We can't just send you a basic "this is the tech of the SARP" thing because we don't really have it. Everyone on this board has kind of wanted something like it, but there's a myraid of tech used here, and anytime we design something, part of the process relies on us going out and reading up on what came before.

It's the best way to learn. Trust me. You'll see inconsistencies, strange theories that don't make sense to you, and outdated concepts worth reviving. It's all very mixed up, but that's part of the learning process.

However ... starting here might be your best place to start out.
 
renako said:
All Einharians are beautiful by nature and possess the fastest regeneration speed of all ; Faster Than Light. (Example: You shoot off their hand, but the hand is still there and yet another drop to the ground.)

How do you KILL them? I would really like to hear the answer to that one.
 
I wouldn't approve it on the level of the name alone. It looks like someone tried writting "Einherjar" but disfigured the name with typos. I heartily suggest a name change (espcially if those are aliens and shouldn't have anything to do with Earth/terran culture).
 
So essensially, you're looking at producing a "HA HA! I'M BIGGER THAN YOU!" race?

It doesn't work.

For the record, maybe you could tone them down and remove the human element entirely. It would be neat to have something which doesn't even seem sentient to us until we observe it lying in wait for when people decide to cross specific technological boundries like using a technology to travel to other galaxies frequently.

Sort of like a watchdog in space and time that stops any one race from conquering any other in their infancy and removes them when they become too powerful.

T'would be an epic struggle and it would be interesting seeing how the Yams and their neighbors handle it or even what the Mishhu do politically.
 
How do you KILL them? I would really like to hear the answer to that one.
Why shove them out an airlock of course! =D
A flamethrower is fine too.

And I think this race really needs to have a system destroyer type weapon laying around , the kind of thing that can destroy stars.
Yesssss.. <rubs>
 
Would you two mind making your comments a bit more constructive instead of just mocking the guy's concept? I don't see you improving on it.

My advice, Renako, is to leave this on the ice. You just joined the site and already are creating a race while not really grasping the scope of the setting or getting a feel of its players. Create yourself a character from the already existing races and sinply join in and roleplay. Not only would you potentially have a good time, but you'd learn in the process, thus making your future submissions more sensible to the environment.
 
lol, I have already thrown this all away XP When I was making this, I already have the answer of the admins/mods in mind =3

Gah, so I have to look through ships by ships...Not to mention mecha. Oh well, I see you all in a few days...After I finish abosrbing stuff into my worthless brain @_@

As for the Einharjar part, yes I sorta agree =P VP > All ^^;; It was my first failure in trying to say it XDD Cause Lenneth always said it as Einhariyar or so in the game when she spread her wings =3

To 'kill' them, you need a large impusle energy such as those from the Legacy Cannon to inhabit them to the law of this universe for they were ruled under a different physic law. Once they had cut their linkwith the law of existance of their own dimension, they will be forced to follow the law of existance here, thus simple deletion is easy.

Well, that's that...I am making a Nep chari most likely >_>;;
 
Ah, sure....I will SPOILT TEH ENDING!! IT'S XJLGKDFKDK *Zip mouth*

Sorry, ebil second personality took over >_> (text cut out here)

We should leave this topic at rest ^^ Good luck to getting all secrets in VP!

Fred edit: I told you to say nothing! not even that little bit. Don't hint at all.
 
If you've played the first one (like me), then you should know how it's pronounced.

If my PS1 weren't borked I'd be playing it right now...damn.
 
I'd just like to emphasise that the Imaginery Number technology makes no sense to science as we currently understand them.
 
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