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Approved Submission Rokin Isles

Kim

Kim

スター軍の司書
Submission Type: Setting Location
Template Used: N/A
Submission WIP URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:location:rokin_isles
Submission Destination URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=location:rokin_isles

Faction: Yamatai
FM Approved Yet? No, @Gunhand4171 @Ametheliana - I got the permission to generate the article, they have not read it yet.
Faction requires art? No

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? No
Previously Submitted? No.

Notes: Mostly referenced vaguely in character backstory.
 
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Some of the descriptions of the physical appearance of those from the Rokin Isles in the article you have written do not match the physical descriptions of the characters listed from the Isles, who are either clones or have changed bodies... Speaking of those characters, Belinda Blake doesn't actually have any mention of the Rokin Isles on their page.

Please put text underneath the title header, before the map image.

Please go over the intro paragraph for spelling and grammar or I will of you'd like.
 
I felt it was a good idea to show what an unaltered, natural born local would look like despite the fact that those few characters that list Rokin as their home of record have altered themselves, with Nai being the most extreme case of changing. Belinda is mixed so she's not typical either. But I'll go through it again. I forget why I never put it on Blake's page but I'll fix it.
 
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