Submission Type: Species (multiple technically)
Submission URL:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=valsh_nar_empire
Faction: None
FM Approved Yet? No
Faction requires art? Yes
For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes
Contains New art? oNo
Previously Submitted? No
Notes:
Finally getting around to submitting this, not 100% complete though getting close. Wanted some feedback on these guys and improvements because I know there needs to be a few.
The Valsh'Nar Empire is designed to be a hostile fraction ( I say fraction as in group of things not necessarily needing a FM or anything) for players to fight against and potentially be a bigger threat on the over all stage maybe, just kind of an idea. The VNE is a more sophisticated and cohesive fighting force than some other insectoid races and also have a higher bit of technology as well (and maybe top hats as opposed to trucker hats). Any Further explanations I will gladly answer during critiquing.
Submission URL:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=valsh_nar_empire
Faction: None
FM Approved Yet? No
Faction requires art? Yes
For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes
Contains New art? oNo
Previously Submitted? No
Notes:
Finally getting around to submitting this, not 100% complete though getting close. Wanted some feedback on these guys and improvements because I know there needs to be a few.
The Valsh'Nar Empire is designed to be a hostile fraction ( I say fraction as in group of things not necessarily needing a FM or anything) for players to fight against and potentially be a bigger threat on the over all stage maybe, just kind of an idea. The VNE is a more sophisticated and cohesive fighting force than some other insectoid races and also have a higher bit of technology as well (and maybe top hats as opposed to trucker hats). Any Further explanations I will gladly answer during critiquing.
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