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Approved Character [188604] Yinsar "Mouse" Kine

There needs to be linked in things, such as YE 20 for his birthdate in his history. Linking up a profile is good practice, so it'd be a good thought to link anything that the wiki can return with a search.

And where was he born? Nepleslia, Nepleslia Prime...? A Nepleslian needs to have been born on some world or a system, so naming that would be good. It can provide good plothooks for your future plot experiences as much as for the one you intend to join.

And I know you talked with @Primitive Polygon, but maybe figuring out what kind of group the Freespacers he originally signed on with could be a good call. Really basic things can go a long way to hooking yourself into the plot, even as small as those might sound.
 
His "Date of birth" doesn't' actually have his birth date.
 
I've made adjustments to the wiki page based on your feedback.

I've sent a PM to Primitive Polygon, and will change what he suggests when he's next available.
 
Cool, sounds great!
 
How is Yinsar's role in the Sky Guard working out for him? Everything good?
 
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