Approved Character A new Pilot for the YSS Artemis!

Classytootsypop

Inactive Member

• Jan 14, 2020

• #1

@Glein @Andrew
Here he is! Titus Phane
A guy that doesn't really stand out. A good soldier, follows orders to the best of his ability, socializes well. Your rank and file talented soldier and pilot, but with a story all the same.

 

Andrew

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• Jan 14, 2020

• #2

@Classytootsypop

This has FM Approval , Actual Character can be further reviewed by Game Master. @Glein

Somethings I want to point out:

• I fixed some red links for you (PS. Make sure to customize your user page!)
• There are some areas that can be wikified, you're new to the site so it will take some time to catch onto this so I'm not being picky about it
• I would consider re-reading some of the profile it needs some tense corrections, grammar fixes (Grammarly is a great extension for Chrome, I generally recommend it.)

 

Glein

Inactive Member

• Jan 20, 2020

• #3

Reading over it on my end, it all looks good to me. Welcome aboard as the bus driver for the Artemis's ground elements!

 

RaWolfe

Retired Staff

Inactive Member

• Jan 20, 2020

• #4

FM and GM approved, character is approved

 

Classytootsypop

Inactive Member

• Jan 20, 2020

• #5

Yay!