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Abwehran Hyperspace Fold

Abwehran Commander

Abwehran Commander

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Up until now, the Abwehrans have been using a standard Hyperspace Fold system practically everyone in SARP uses. But after a couple of years or so, I decided it needed a bit of variation by ship type.Because of this, the Abwehran model of Hyperspace Fold system was born. Variations of the drive include charge time, travel distance, bubble capability, and relative velocity. If a Fold drive has bubble capability, I've also listed the bubble's volume.
 
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This review is for: Abwehran Hyperspace Fold

The submitted article is/has…
[x] A general topic sentence under the title header
[ ] Artwork (illustrations are strongly encouraged for all spacecraft and handheld items)
[x] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[x] In the proper format/template
[x] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[x] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[x] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[x] No red and/or broken links
[x] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[x] Reasonably neutral point of view

The submitted article is/does not…
[x] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[x] Obtusely redundant
[x] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[x] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[x] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[x] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[x] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[x] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[x] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[x] Lacking Detail
[x] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)

The article has…
[x] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[x] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[x] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[ ] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.

Status: Approved

Notes
It's honestly quite bare, but since it's just a weaker version of what already exists, I don't have any reason to complain. There are no new mechanisms or effects in the usage of this drive aside from the bubble effect of which I am certain there is a precedent.

I intend to finish this review by: DONE
 
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