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Approved Character Akada Ayonmit

Beta112

Inactive Member
====== Akada Ayonmit ======

^ Akada Ayonmit ^^
| {{ }} ||
^ Species: | Surfacer |
^ Gender: | Male |
^ Age: | 8 |
^ Zodiac Sign: | Scropio |
^ Family (or Creators): | (new names to come later) |
^ Height: | 6' 7" |
^ Weight: | 210 Lbs |
^ Bra Size: | None |
^ Organization: | Abwehran Armed Forces, Weltraumflotte |
^ Occupation: | Rifleman |
^ Rank: | Maat |
^ Current Placement: | HMS Fearless |



===== Akada Ayonmit in Roleplay =====
Akada Ayonmit is a Abwehran Surfacer played by Beta112 and is currently involved in the To be deployed plot.



===== Physical Characteristics =====
**Height:** 6' 7"\\
**Weight:** 210 Lbs\\
**Measurements:** None\\
**Bra Size:** None

**Build and Skin Colour:** Grey, white ash like color. Closely resembles a lightweight boxer.

**Facial Features and Eye Colour:** Eyes, blue. A thin scar runs from the corner of his right eyebrow to his hairline, don't play with fireworks kids.

**Hair Colour and Style:** Red hair cut short, military style. \\


**Distinguishing Features:** A small but noticeable scar runs from the right corner of his right eyebrow and into his hairline. \\




===== Psychological Characteristics =====
**Personality:** Akada is generally calm person, unless he's in an intense situation, in which case he will become angry easy, impairing his judgment. Akada has an uncanny ability to discern between friend and foe, because of a rather friendly past he is a rather trusting person because of this. \\
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Akada is best described as a sidekick type person, strong and following though on his word, yet with an inability to act on his own. Akada has a strong sense of brotherhood to the people who fight alongside him, able to throw himself in front of a bullet without hesitation. Despite of all this Akada doesn’t take too many things very seriously, often joking about things that shouldn't be joked about (important things that exploded).

**Likes:** Strong leaders, big guns, having the advantage, close combat, open air flying, big landscapes\\
**Dislikes:** Acting alone, people who laugh at things that aren’t funny, loud noises in the morning, being outgunned, being underestimated. \\
**Goals:** Akada wants to find a ring of friends that he can trust his life with, people that know what he is going to say before he says it.



===== History =====
==== Pre-RP ====
Akada grew up with a rather normal child hood, his father, who also served as a marine, taught him everything he know about fighting. As a side note Akada had to deal with a lot of underestimation because of his relatively smaller size compared to most males, despite this Akada was known to knock you on your ass before you could raise your fist. \\
At age four he received the scar on his forehead after improperly loading a small rocket. Akada joined the armed forces as of his eight Abwehran birthday and at the time he has just finished basic. He enters active duty in one week. \\


===== Skills =====
==== Fighting ====
Akada’s primary ability lies in his ability to fight in mid range quarters. He has a natural ability to know where his enemy is going to take cover and situates himself accordingly. Using a typical burst of fire technique he can use the three seconds he has an angle to drop even the most fearsome of foes.

==== Physical ====
Because he grew up on a high gravity world and he is relatively light for his species Akada can run at high speeds for extended amounts of time.

==== Survival and Military ====
Akada possess endurance in all forms, save for boredom. Akada can endure hunger and sleep deprivation for extreme amounts of time, in the event of a long and undersupplied journey. He can also ignore extreme pain if the situation requires it, save for the first few seconds after being shot.

==== Mathematics ====
Trained in basic mathematics in both civilian school and military basic.

==== Communications ====
Akada has a way of communicating with people without talking. This is not telepathy its just a talent in reading body language. This skill is extremely useful when you want to run an ambush and can't talk too loudly.

==== Demolitions ====
Moderately proficient in demolitions, with some mild training in the architecture of alien construction Akada can know the general weak points to place explosives.

==== Technology Operations ====
Trained to be efficient in operating starship class manual weapon systems should their connection with the bridge fail, also learned in basic.

===== Inventory =====

==== Clothing ====

=== Uniforms ===
2 turtlenecks, appropriate department color with Imperial Seal on right breast arm, ship/unit patch on left arm, branch patch on right arm
2 cotton tank-top undershirts, white
2 pair cargo pants, black
1 pair suede leather gloves, black
1 pair leather boots, black
1 pistol belt, leather, black, with holster for Standard Service Pistol
1 turtleneck, appropriate department color
1 pair Khaki dress pants 1 Khaki Skirt (optional)
1 beret, appropriate color for command, with Imperial Seal on front
1 black dress jacket, waist length, patches in same places as standard turtle neck, magnetic plate on left breast for medals
1 pair suede leather gloves, black 1 pair leather boots, black

=== Weather Gear ===
1 beret, appropriate color for command, with Imperial Seal on front
1 black trench coat, ankle length

=== Workout Clothing and Undergarments ===
1 T-shirt, white, with Branch logo print
1 pair black sweat pants 2 black swimsuit bottom
1 pair black sandals 4 black cotton briefs 4 pair of black boot socks

==== Accessories ====
1 Rank Pin, appropriate rank, which goes on turtle neck collar
1 MDP-3-01 Brefreier Standard Service Pistol with
2 additional magazines
1 Survival knife, solid diamond with rubberized grip and lanyard with black leather sheath with loop and clips for belt attachment
1 Vial

==== Personal Hygiene ====
1 bottle of shampoo
1 bottle liquid body soap
1 toothbrush and tube of toothpaste
2 washcloths, white
2 towels, large, white

==== Electronics ==== * Electronic Money Card

==== Miscellaneous ====



===== Finances =====
Akada Ayonmit is currently a Maat in the Abwehran Armed Forces. He receives a weekly salary of -salary- per week.
^ Total Savings ^ Addition ^ Subtraction ^ Reason ^
| 9000 Credits | | | Starting Funds |


===== OOC Discussion =====
Akada will develop a more interesting background as RP progresses.
 
Hello. Do you have this on the wiki yet?
 
Cool. Can you post the link to it here?
 
Ah, an Abwehran. I'll send a message to the local Abwehran guy so he can give it the final OK.
 
Sweet, new Abwehran character!

Welcome to SARP, I'm ze Abwehran Commander (creator of said species).

Let me point out the Abwehran Character Creation Guide to you to help in matters of correction.

Now that we have introductions out of the way, let us being the critique. First we will start off at the top with the name...Akada seems to be a Japanese name, though I could be wrong. The Abwehran naming scheme tends to be more Germanic. Same goes for your character's parents.

Second order of business is age. I assume 21 years is the age of your character in Earth Years. Abwehrans tend to age at a very different rate from normal humanoids. Abwehran years differ from Earth years by a factor of 3.551. This means your 21 year old Abwehran will be closing in on his 6th Abwehran Year by now. But don't let the low number fool you, Abwehrans are of adult age by Five. Appearance wise, your character would probably look about seventeen to nineteen year old and will probably look like that until he reaches approximately 13 Abwehran Years (46 Earth Years).

((Fun Note: Abwehrans tend to live for about 177 Earth Years))

Technically, your character's organization would be listed as Weltraumflotte, Abwehran Armed Forces or vice versa. Your character's Occupation is found on the following Marine Corp Occupation List. Placement/Assignment would probably be the HMS Fearless, the only Abwehran Plot currently available. It's on assignment at the moment, but I believe I can work you in somehow.

Personality and Goals are all cool.

Your History seems a bit piecemeal, but you've named quite a few important points of your character's life. If you have anything you want to add in your edits, please feel free to do so. There's plenty to chose from if you look at the Abwehran's Pre-History Timeline.

The part of your application that needs the most work is your skill area. SARP as a whole uses this style of skill system in order to explain what a character can do. The initial Skills needed for Abwehran Soldiers can be found on the bottom. But you pick seven skill areas over all, so you pick the four initial skills plus the skills you receive from your occupation as well. You can look at Erna Löwenherzt's sheet as an example.

The last bit is the financial section, which is 9000 Credits since Abwehrans don't use KS.

I'm glad you've decided to make an Abwehran character and I will try to work you into my plot once you are done. All this character needs is a little work and polish.

Edit: Quick note on history, it is illegal for Abwehran civilians to carry firearms. Therefore he couldn't have owned a firearm before joining the military.
 
Shweet new player, I'm Nevaraon, I play an Abwehran too. Glad to have ya coming aboard. I was starting to feel a little lonely. Two moderaters and a player does not make for a very fun time. Too long of waiting periods ya know?

Also for your history, I know that we Nightwalkers have a familial sword that we all study how to use. Not sure if the Surfacers are the same though.
 
I'll give Abwe' the power over this one.

Mainly because it is his race. :lol:

Abwe is your fellow for this, when he thinks it is ready I'll take a quick look over it for various basics and then approve it.
 
Yeah, thanks for that. At the time I wrote that I hadn't read though the general abwherhan description, only those of the sub-species. (I hadn't found the page for the general descriptions yet)

Actually Akada is a Russian name, and I just used random names from the credits page of a Naruto game for his parent’s names.
 
I see.

*ponders a moment*

I still don't think the Abwehrans would have anything remotely Russian-like, considering they've only had minimal contact with other star nations. There really isn't another language on Abwehr either so that only leave their Germanic-style tongue.
 
Fixed.

Akada is a name that has a long story for me, its just one of those names that is commonly used in my writings, along with Novgood and Gensing. But Akada started off as a pun on Arcadia which along with being a place in Greece means a peaceful setting. Meaning it's misnomer for the Akada character who is normally a soldier. So I chose it based on the characters personality not heritage.

Also I've been reading a bit of the HMS fearless thread, you seem to be going to ground at the moment, though I may be wrong I started at the last few post and only read like three so far. That would be a good time to introduce him as Akada is a blank, and it would be understandable if he spent some time on the ship without doing anything notable yet.
 
Before I go on, I'd like to note that you should keep your wiki page updated. It will be easier you to edit it on Wiki and easier for me to read it there.

First off, I'd like to reiterate that your Organization should be Weltraumflotte, Abwehran Armed Forces or vice versa...your Occupation is to be chosen from the Marine Corp Occupation List. Skills for said Occupation are listed as well as a description.

Speaking of skills, I don't think you really need to mention Physical. All Abwehrans are born on a high gravity world and thus are lighter on normal gravity worlds. You should also mention some of the stuff he would have learned in his basic training for some of the skills you already have, basic stuff located here.

Hmmm...those are the major items in question right now. A minor item of changing 3000 KS to 9000 Credits would be in order since 1 KS = 3 Credits, but that's trivial in comparison.
 
Updated. I didn't change the physical skill set because he is meant to be a menial character and I had trouble finding that many skills for him. Despite how much I long to just skewer this one and write a Novgood style plot (revenge driven past conflict arousing heavy gunner).
 
That last sentence didn't make a lick of sense to me.

Anyway, I believe we have a winner.

I'm Abwehran_CMDR and I approve this character! *poses like a presidential candidate*
 
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