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Well after taking a quick look nothing seems really out of place to me, my personal view is that many of the sections in the articles could be expanded to provide more details but i guess i like to write lots, and the only outstanding thing i noticed was in the umbrella page the more about section seems to use some bombastic? Language to describe Akemi but doesn't say much else about the conglomerate itself other than he owns and runs it?